Openers
1. Paul cackles as he watches the paper burns into ashes.
2. Sally cries as she slowly removes one clothing by one clothing on her.
3. Lun rushes out of the house with a chopper in his hands.
4. Bernard and Gilbert could not stop laughing as they punch each other in the face.
5. Red smiles as she gets push into the operation room.
6. With trembling hands, Yvonne scanned through Goat’s handphone.
7. While the family is engrossed in singing the birthday song for Kelly, boiling water is spilling out of the kettle into the flame under it.
8. “Father & Mother, i have a present for you.” Willie said happily with a gun behind his back.
9. Bernard took up the hammer and gave his head a great knock.
10. Willy feels a hand on his shoulder, but there is noone except him in the mirror.
11. Kate throws her newly-bought laptop on the floor, smashing it into pieces.
12. Martin runs up the stage and gives the principal a tight slap. The hall goes silent.

Your openers are short and sweet – mostly. #3 and #6 are very typical and general but the rest are intriguing and have lots of potential for stories. I like #5 very much – says so much by saying so little. What only 8 openers though? The assignment requires you write 12.
Thanks a lot. Sorry about the 8 openers. I’ve added the 4 additional one. Hope they are good.